thelibraniniquity: (tli default)
thelibraniniquity ([personal profile] thelibraniniquity) wrote in [personal profile] teyla 2007-05-22 02:01 am (UTC)

Hehe, nice.

suspiciously looked
Would read better as 'looked suspiciously'

spouse abuse
'spousal'

Can't spot anything else, but very sleepy at the moment... ;)

Good luck coming up with an ending. Or, you know, you could just end it there, as it is.

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