Sorry I'm only commenting now. It's been a very busy weekend. Anyway, I think your story is wonderful! You write House and Wilson so well! I could hear both Hugh Laurie and Robert Sean Leonard whenever I was reading your great dialogue! I was impressed by how well you were able to infuse House with his usual biting wit and fierce sarcasm and then change the mood completely as House struggled to help Wilson through his grief. You were able to show a more sensitive side to House and yet keep him in character. Not an easy feat!

I'm looking forward to reading more House stories from you in the future. You obviously know this fandom and its characters very well.